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Hell Hath no FuryBut I bought you a souvenir!
FalseTesting, testing; one, two, three, testing
ProgressI could; did; regret. Miss terribly.
CircumstancesHis and her; circumstances can change.
Mix of a Healthy HeartFirst add: sunlight
with a pinch of clouds,
soft and light and
just a drop of a rainy
bucket of warmth and a hug,
one for every day of the year.
Keep in reach of children.

Next: balloons
in every color imaginable,
smiles stretched
across the rubber with
long strings to hold and tie
to a tall tree, strong
with many branches to climb.

Finally: of course,
a few stars must be added
for future wishes.
An incomplete mixture,
a healthy heart is,
and always crammed full
with memories,
but never too packed
for an extra joke or two.
Tick TockTick tock sings a clock,
watching midnight hand strike down.
The gong echoes twelve.

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If at first you don't succeed...

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~daniWby Mar 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
No one should hide away from his own challenge, hard times in one's life time makes him stronger, hah. (I'm i right about your poem? you know, my English isn't well enough to always understand English literature)
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=Daghrgenzeen Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
To me, the message is: Keep on going, no matter what. A reminder I really needed. :D
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~BursaPastoris Dec 20, 2012
That's the spirit! (: No matter how many times you lose, get up each time and try again! The only true failure is walking away from a challenge.
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=Daghrgenzeen Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:nod: Indeed.
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